I can't stay together
with someone like you,
You don't care about me.
You care about you.
This is what you've been waiting for.
I can already tell.
There are other girls that like you,
and you want them instead.
I'm sorry that you'r a pig,
can't stay with one girl.
I thought I was yours,
when you were my world.
Now that it's over,
it's done and through.
Though you I will miss,
I can't stay with you.
I may feel like I'll cry,
but I'm sure I'll be okay.
I'm better off now,
now that you're far away.
-Bailey Holcomb
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hey there!
:D
This was so sweet... even if the point wasn't to be sweet
Anyway, this was good, it was like a first teenager love, and getting over with it.
I liked it
A bit cliche, but i liked this on the most
Keep writing!
this is one of the most beautiful things that ive ever read. it sounds a lot like reality.
Ah, Bailey... *crying* That was so sweet and so sad. Beautiful, beautiful. I give you a gold star.
I love the metaphor here. It made me laugh.
Good job!